I thank You, God (Draft 2)

Draft 2 of my song. The language is still mixed, English and Swiss German. My goal is to sing it in German, but to get your feedback I use English words. The English translation is still poor, but it's the best I can give in the available amount of time. I hope it's understandable.

I extended the verse and wrote a second verse. I also added a prechorus - how do you like it?
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I splitted my song into an German (3.4 MB, 2:30 min) and an English (2.8 MB, 2:00 min) version. (June 3)