Songwriting 2011 First Draft

I began this project with a song vision that has been brewing for a while. Revelations 3:14-20 has been a scripture that has been full of impact for me and I feel like we are a world that has forgotten about an authentic relationship with God. It has been a struggle this week to bring all of my thoughts and heart cries to some coherent focal point. I thought about changing my song vision and choosing a simpler topic but I figured it would be a great learning experience to be completely out of my comfort zone with this song and receive feedback along the way.

I have recorded and drafted the first two verses as they were just a short time ago - and plan to have a pre-chorus and chorus that will serve as a recommitment - asking God to reignite our passion... I have approached this like a congregational lament.

I look forward to and appreciate your analysis